Monday, September 21, 2015

Ode To Horses

I had to write an Ode for reading homework. Weird that it wasn't in english class, isn't it? Anyway, here it is. 

Ode to Horses
Powerful hooves beat the ground.
Flowing tails glide through the air.
Like a bullet, they gallop by.
They are soaring eagles when they run.

Clippety clop. Clippety clop.
The sound of their hooves is soothing.
Quiet whinnies sound from the stalls,
their warm breath is like a whisper of reassurance.

Gently eyes and a soft nose.
The smell of hay is faint and sweet.
Tails swish from side to side like old clocks, 
I smile. 

Do you like it? 

P.S: I won't be posting A Lost World anymore since nobody read it. 


  1. Ooh, I like it!!!! You are a very good writer!!! :) I am sorry to hear about A Lost World, I enjoyed reading it. I have never read the Warriors series, but A Lost World is amazing!!! :)

    1. Thank you Marrissa!
      Aww I'm glad you liked it. If you want to continue reading it, go here:

  2. Love it! Beautiful imagery.

    - Ellie

  3. This was amazing! I felt as if I was riding a horse while reading...a bit out of breath when I finished! Have you every tried rhyming the verses? It's very fun to me....trying to beat the clock as I find a rhyming word for the previous verse. ; D

    1. Oh thank you! I'm so glad! I really wanted to plant a picture in your head with this one, make you feel like you were there.
      I think I will try ryming next time!