Tuesday, May 19, 2015

The Dragon's Awakening

Hello!
I have a new goal. Each day I will write a short story, just a paragraph or two. I am doing this to develop my writing. Basically, I'm practicing! I probably won't share all of my writing with you, but today I will. Inspired by the following picture prompt, here is, The Dragon's Awakening.
     The Dragon's Awakening
"I have something to show you." Yuko told his best friend Ben, "But you have to promise not to tell anyone about it, it's a secret." "I promise." Ben said without a doubt. "Okay..." Yuko said. He reached into his pocket, emptied a brown pouch into his hand, and cupped his hands over the unknown object. "What is it?" Ben asked, Peering at Yuka's clasped hands with curiousity. Slowly, Yuka opened his hands, revealing a tiny, black, winged reptile. Ben stared at it with a gaping mouth. "The dragons are back." He murmured.

So... What do you think? This is my 3rd writing style I use.The others are displayed in The Ghost Of Mulberry Lane and Beyond. Which of these three pieces of my writing is your favorite?

~Tenley




7 comments:

  1. Awesome story! :) The ending sends chills down my spine. I think I like The Ghost of Mulberry Lane best.
    And the the idea of writing something every day is great, too! :) I think I might try it!

    - Ellie

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    1. Thank you! Really? I found that most people I showed that to did not really enjoy it...

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  2. I love this! And I like The Ghost of Mulberry Lane best too.
    I really like the idea of writing every day!
    ~Kathryn

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    1. Thank you! That surprises me! I thought most people would go for Beyond.

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    2. I also like Beyond-I hope you decide to post the next part soon . : )
      ~Kathryn

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  3. I might try to write every day!
    <3Bella
    P.S I really liked it!

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