Friday, May 8, 2015

Beyond, Part 4!

   Hi! I just got part 4 all ready and edited! I hope you like it! Please leave your input in the comments!

    "Brooke..." Jade breathed, "We need to get out of here. Now. Run."Jade whispered. Then I saw them behind me, armed soldiers, King Rafasi's soldiers. Quickly, I nodded at Jade, and we sprinted away from the men, agile with our jumps over brush and fallen trees. We ran away from Malum Woods, we ran east, towards Giifadail, one of the few kingdoms we were,(partially) welcome in. 

 So... Did you like it? Are you excited for Part 5?

 ~Tenley
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8 comments:

  1. KathrynMay 8, 2015 at 1:21 PM

    I finally had a chance to read all the parts you have so far, and my gosh it is so interesting! Jade sounds like a nice older sister. : )
    I wonder why Brooke took the amulet! I hope they don't get in any more trouble!

    ~Kathryn

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    1. UnknownMay 8, 2015 at 1:53 PM

      Thank you! Don't worry, you'll find out soon enough!

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  2. A Doll's LifeMay 8, 2015 at 1:37 PM

    I love it! How did you think of all the names for the places and people?
    <3Bella

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    1. UnknownMay 8, 2015 at 1:55 PM

      Thanks! Well, for the most part I just picked what sounded best. But, for Malum Woods, "Malum" means evil in Latin.

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    2. KathrynMay 8, 2015 at 7:59 PM

      Oh, forgive me for instruding on the conversation, but you take Latin? YAY! I use Latin words in some of my stories too! : )
      ~Kathryn

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    3. UnknownMay 8, 2015 at 8:03 PM

      You do not need to apoligize! No, I do not take Latin, but I teach myself bits and pieces of several languages. (Italian, French, Cherokee, and Latin)

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    4. KathrynMay 9, 2015 at 3:31 PM

      That's so cool!
      ~Kathryn

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    5. UnknownMay 9, 2015 at 8:50 PM

      Thanks! Or, Merci! (That was French.) ;)

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